Tuesday, July 20, 2010
My Daughter, Resident Milk and Honey Editor
With all these exciting new changes in my business, I have been working on a press release to send to some local publications. I'm tooting my own horn about my new packaging, receiving a grant from the USDA, and wanting to attract micro investments to support Milk and Honey's next growth steps.
I just had to tell you that I asked my daughter to proof it for me, and she made a genius editing suggestion: she changed "stunning new matchbox-style packaging " to "charming new matchbox-style packaging ."
You better believe I took that advice. And then watched her swell with well-earned pride!
More on seeking micro investors soon!
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